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Tuesday 12 April 2011

Gabby's Fish Life

One afternoon I got put in a glass tank and named Bubbles. E
Ever since then, I have had animals look at me, stare at me and even watch me and all the others too. I think it’s kind of random.
One day two animals brought in some rocks big rocks. It was cool with a k. I thought they were going to put it in the tank but no they had to scrub it, clean it, wash it and even let it dry yet it was still not in our tank. It sucked a lot because now we don’t have anything to hide in except the weed that is fake.

By Gabby

Pike's day



“What a Day! This morning I was just happily swimming around the pond, when a big, net thing scoops me up.
 Next thing I know I’m in a tank! Oh, hi my name is Bebo and I’m a fresh water guppie. Anyway, back to the story. So now I’m in a tank right? But it’s not that bad; I’m here with seven other guppies, oh now it’s only five! In my new tank there is a jug house, fake plants, rocks and the Bubble THEMEPARK. I go there all the time with Bobblelogs and Bubbles. You get blown around in the bubbles and it is SO MUCH FUN!!!!! To eat we have food from a can, and when scary h-u-m-a-n-s look at me I hide in the weeds. My new life is much better than my old one in the pond. Even if it is a bit scary, but new adventures are so much fun, This tank is full of them and surprises, I can’t wait!!!
By Eva

Bubble's Life

Hi my name is Bubbles and I am the smallest fish in the tank. I have a rainbow coloured tail and a silver body. There are six of us in the tank, there were eight but I kinda got a bit hungry last night, but hey, they didn’t feed us yesterday so it’s not my fault. We got put in here the day before yesterday. We came from a small creek which is about an hour away from here. But in our tank there is a big Air Slide it is so much fun!!!! My new friends are: Larry who is sleeping as usual, Stella who is looking into the glass doing her hair, Mrs Guppy who is dusting the fish tank, Higgy who is playing Hide and Go-Seek with the snails and Steve who is banging against the glass trying to get out.( Which we all know that it obviously won’t work, so we all have learned to ignore it.) So this is my life and hopefully I’ll have a fishy girlfriend and will grow taller and fatter by the time I next see you. (Probably not!!) Bye!!

By Rebecca K

A Freaky, Fish Tale

“Come on fish, keep swimming!”  I yelled as I frantically searched for somewhere safe to hide.
“Ahhhhh!” shouted one of my friends as a big, thick net swooped around her and picked her up.
“Marcie!” I shouted. The big net lowered down again and began to scoop my family and friends up. ‘Keep on swimming’ I told myself as the dangerous net cornered me. I was coming to the end of the stream, when suddenly I was lifted up into the outside world.
“Mum I caught one,” the human said.
 “Good job Courtney,” another one answered.
“I think that’s enough.” I was carefully lowered into a white bucket.
 “Abby!” cried my friend Marcie.
 “What’s happened?” she said.
 “I don’t know,” I replied. I turned around to see all the worried townsfolk talking quietly amongst themselves.
"Let’s go mum,” a voice beamed. Suddenly the bucket was lifted up.
“Let’s get some rest,” I advised. When everyone had seemed to have nodded off, I slowly opened my eyes. Hopefully everything would be alright.
When I woke up I screamed. Obviously it woke everyone else up too.
“Oh my fish fins!” one of the stubborn fish said.
“Arhhhhh!” I yelped. I slowly swam forward.
“Where am I?” I cried. All of a sudden the other fish swam forward.
 “AHHHHHHH!” she yelled.
“Seriously,” I said “Can’t you see there are other things to think about?”
 Instantly, a man opened the top of the glass tank. Immediately we all swam up to get some of this heavenly smelling food that had been sprinkled on top of the water.
After we had all had a marvellous feast, one of the youngsters swam over to this black thing.
“What’s this?” he said peering underneath it.
 “Help!!!!” he screamed. I quickly turned around. He was gone! ‘I better stay away from that thing’ I thought.
“I bags the jug!” I yelled. I could be here a while so I had better get the best bed!!!

By Rebekah

A Day in the life of Bebo


A day in the life of Bebo
By Sara

“What a Day! This morning I was just happily swimming around the pond, when a big, net thing scoops me up.
 Next thing I know I’m in a tank! Oh, hi my name is Bebo and I’m a fresh water guppie. Anyway, back to the story. So now I’m in a tank right? But it’s not that bad; I’m here with seven other guppies, oh now it’s only five! In my new tank there is a jug house, fake plants, rocks and the Bubble THEMEPARK. I go there all the time with Bobblelogs and Bubbles. You get blown around in the bubbles and it is SO MUCH FUN!!!!! To eat we have food from a can, and when scary h-u-m-a-n-s look at me I hide in the weeds. My new life is much better than my old one in the pond. Even if it is a bit scary, but new adventures are so much fun, This tank is full of them and surprises, I can’t wait!!!