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Wednesday 18 July 2012

The hungry rat

The hungry rat

On February the eleventh in the week end my brother Liam came over, he’s twelve years old. We played a game of cricket. I was bowling he was batting he smashed it and it flew right over me and into a bush and we tried to find it but it wasn’t their when we were about to go inside Liam said “look! A rat and I looked and then we ran up the steps. We looked out the window and it went under a rock wall so we went out and went around it and looked under I saw its tail squiggling around. My dad put bread out so it comes out we went inside and looked out the window again and it came out and grabbed all the bread. We put more out but it wouldn’t come out so we walked away and then we came back and the bread was gone.I said it must of heard us talking before we went out another time. We walked up to it and it ran away into the trees         

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