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Tuesday 10 May 2011

Holiday Recount

  That Sickining Smell
A couple of weeks ago we went somewhere to look at a car and this is how it happened.
“Eva get in the car we need to get going or we won’t get there in time” called me as she was locking the door. “Yes mum, coming” I said flying through the door with a pillow in hand. I wasn’t going to sit there and twiddle my thumbs, I was going to have a quick 40 winks. At first it was hard go to sleep but in the end I got to sleep.                                        
We were in kawakawa and I had woken up, I was hungry but I dad didn’t stop. We were coming out of kawakawa and dad said it was only around one hour to go. I was starting to feel a bit queasy because we were in my granny’s car and it had one of those little smelly bags and the road was winding a lot.
An hour later we pulled in a driveway. At last we were there. Mum and dad jumped out of the car but I just opened the door. After a little while I got out of the car. Once I got out of the car we got into the car we were looking at to go for a test drive. There were heaps of spider webs were the doors met the car. Mum drove down the road first, the road was bumpy. We got down to beach road, mum pulled over and dad got into the driver’s seat and went back to the house.
Mum and dad ended up buying it. I didn’t feel too bad on the way home. (Thank goodness for that) Mum and dad were going to go and pick up the car the next day. Mum said that I said that I didn’t have to go with them. Yess!
by Eva M

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